Fangala the Flying Feline

Adorable! I laughed out loud when I finished reading. I'll be genuinely shocked if you don't win this contest.

Hi! It's my absolute pleasure to help you get published, so here we go: First, congratulations. It's difficult to tweak your reader's heartstrings in the first chapter, before we even ...

Oh. My. God. This is possibly the most darkly beautiful thing I have ever read on this site. You had me hooked from the first sentence and you didn't let ...

Okay, here's what I think. Most fantasy is seriously lacking the emotional department. No matter how breathtaking the plot, the reader will be less likely to remember it unless it ...

My intuition says Mai, but Gina comes in second place.

Great writing! It makes me curious what fantastical things are about to happen. And now, jumping straight into the critique: The sound of a buzzing alarm intruded on Alexia’s dream. ...

I can't believe no one's commented on this yet! I have absolutely nothing bad to say. The voice is so clear, the characterization so succinct--you've really nailed it. I adore ...

Ha! First to review! But hopefully not the first to be stunned. I mean, WOW. What a brilliant topic and execution. At first I thought this was yet another vampire ...

Um, yes, she drew them. Guess I should make that clear. Sela: as for Darian's face crumbling, you brought up an interesting point. Now I'm tempted to leave it up ...

Yikes! What's with the bad reviews? I for one think this is really good. It's not tired and worn-out at all; it has a nice satirical ring, that's all. Very ...

First of all, thanks for saying that Chessie is the opposite of Bella. That was medicine for my soul. Now, onto your story: Excellent! You have a real talent for ...

OMG! MY name is Rita! I don't really look like your character, though. :) Anyway, what a beautiful drawing. It reminds me of the astrology sign Pisces. Now I'm thoroughly ...

Hi! Remember me? Your writing just keeps getting better and better. This piece is amazing. It pulled me along at breakneck speed, so when I reached the end it was ...

Skye Fields looked in the full-length mirror and pretended she had a body. But even with oranges stuffed in her bra and a nice stack of oven mitts in the ...

Three and a half cheers for Pablo Neruda! My God, what a genius. "I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees." Doesn't that just make ...